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◎Card Holder
Material: Acrylic
Size: W180*H189*D110mm
Concept: Combined with Acrylic, cards may be used when applying nail enamel into this card
holder. Combined with Acrylic, cards may
be positioned into the finger separator of the holders.

◎Card Holder
Material: Acrylic
Size: H76*W85*D55mm
Concept: Transforming the nail separator used when applying nail enamel into this card holder. Combined with Acrylic, cards may be placed on all sides of the holder.

◎Toothpick Holder
Material: Acrylic. test tubes
Size:H70*W72*D120mm
Concept: This design based on disposed test tubes as the main component, combined with
semi-trainsparent, blue Acrylic to make this
funky toothpick holder. The idea was derived
from the imagery of mangroves floating in wetlands.

◎Ornament
Material: thin hemp rope, ribbon and thin metal wire
Size:H77*W126*D94mm
Concept: Cover hemp rope with PVC glue and wrap rope around balloons, wait until dry then pop the balloon to have shape maintained.
Use tow hollow cone-shape object and metal wire to create and maintain the shape.
Decorate with ribbons to finish.

◎Design Concept
Because our industrialised society is at fast-pace, people tend to ignore body signals of alarming health effects,therefore causes diseases and disorders to worsen without knowing.
This design uses technology to examine hormonal release from saliva in order to adjust and maintain healthy functions
of the body. Coming from the point that precaution is more effective when in threat of a disease, rather than finding ways to cure a after diagnosis, this design is aimed to eliminate the development of disease.

◎Safe Examination Made Easy
Saliva self-testing kit is safe and convenient, now you can do it in the privacy of your own home, no more queuing up in front of the hospital reception wasting precious time.

Simple Instructions
Place 1-2 drops of saliva on the testing ball, the chip inside the ball will automatically detect the saliva for analysis. The result will show up in detailed information on the display panel of the motherboard for the user to consider whether a change or control of diet is necessary.

Multiple Functions
The display panel in the kitchen operating from the motherboard not only shows up
the result, it is also connected to the Internet for further search of relevant recipes.
The display panel in the bathroom is jointed to the bathroom mirror, aim to remind
the users to do regular examinations in order to maintain health body and mind.

Reduce Storage Space
The headpiece of the testing it is changeable, suited for use of all family members.
Easily distinguished by hygienic and good money for value.
The display panel in the kitchen can be simply hung from the wall, therefore reducing
storage space.
The display panel in bathroom is connected to the bathroom mirror, therefore no need
to purchase another motherboard.

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