幫幫忙

可否幫我看一下這句中翻英這樣翻正確嗎

感激不盡



希望貴公司能夠給我這個機會.我將會非常樂意的接受這份挑戰並向您證明我的能力

I am willing to take this challenge to meet the high standard of the company.
Also I would like to prove my abilities to you.